Friday, 13 June 2014

Story Review, Hemi

The Experiment By Diana Noon an

This story is about a group of children who lived on farms.They had a pie warmer
day at school. Everyone took some food to school that could be heated in a pie warmer.

The characters in this story are Alisha, Matt,  Dad, the children and the teacher. I felt happy when Alisha was able to put her chocolate chip biscuit in the pie warmer because the class felt that she did not have anything to put in the pie warmer because she had a sandwich for lunch.

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By Hemi


  1. Well done Hemi, I really like the picture of the Cookie. I feel like having one now.

  2. Hi Hemi,
    It sounds like a sad story (with Alisha not having anything to put in the pie warmer) but with a happy ending (heating up the cookie). I love chocolate chip cookies - fresh out of the oven or heated a little bit so that the chocolate heats up and melts a little bit!
    Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)