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Thursday, 30 May 2013

Title Page designed by Melenaite using Sumo Paint

Catch of the Day by Kathy Taylor

I am learning to write a procedure on giving directions by Lorraine

Success Criteria:
My writing will have a title, goal , materials and steps
Giving  Directions


Goal
To walk from Glenbrae School to Tamaki College.


Materials
A map of Glen Innes.
 
Steps
1.Walk out of the school gate  and turn left into Leybourn Circle.
2. Walk up to the foot crossing and Stop.
3. Look to the left and right and when the road is clear walk across the road and turn right.
4. Walk up to Fenchurch Street and turn left into Fenchurch Street.
5. Walk past Aveline Place and Sunnymead Road until you come to Taniwha  Street and the Fenchurch Dairy on the right.
6. Turn right into Taniwha Street
7. Walk past Glen Innes Play Centre on the right and walk until you come to Tamaki College Gate.

PROCEDURE WRITING by Fusi





WALT: write a procedure on giving directions


Success Criteria: My writing will have a title, goal, material and steps.


Following Direction


Goal:
To go from Glenbrae School to Tamaki College


Material:
A map of Glen Innes


Steps:
1. Walk out of the school gate and turn left to Leybourne Circle.


2. Walk up to the foot crossing and stop.


3. Look right and left and if the road is clear, walk across the road and turn right.


4. Walk up to Fenchurch Street and turn left into Fenchurch Street.


5. Walk past Aveline Place and Sunnymead Road until you come to Taniwha Street and the Fenchurch Dairy on the right.


6. Turn right into Taniwha Street.


7. Go past Glen Innes Play Centre on the right and walk  until you come to Tamaki College Gate.



As Smooth as Silk by Paul Mason by Moses


This story is about a girl who went snorkeling and found an octopus.
The characters in this story are Dad, Mum, Rachel, The Fishermen and the Octopus. This story takes place at the beach. I liked this story because it was so enjoyable and interesting and fun.





Thursday, 23 May 2013

Story Review by Levi R



Lord Darkflung’s Challenge by Dylan Owen


This story is about three children outsmarting Lord Darkflung with their smart brains and winning three jewels which were Chupa chups.


The characters in this story are Anna,Sophie,Lord Darkflung and Tom.


This story takes place in Lord Darkflung’s and the three childrens home.


I think the story is creative,cool and spectacular.

Story Review by Karl

Skateboards and Spaghetti

In this story the boy is on his skateboard and he invites friends for spaghetti.



Story Review by Fusi


Catch of the Day by Kathy Taylor


This story is about a family going fishing at the wharf. They went fishing so that they could have fish for dinner.


The characters in the story are Polly, Dad, Josh and Campbell. This story takes place at the wharf.


I like this story because it is all about fishing and I like fishing with my family too.





Friday, 17 May 2013

Story Review by Melenaite




Catch Of The Day By Kathy Taylor



This story is about a family going fishing at the wharf so  that mum could  cook fish for dinner.

The characters in the story are Campbell, Polly, Josh and Dad. The story takes place at the wharf near the sea.

I like this story because I love going fishing with my family as well. I felt good when Polly caught a fish because Josh and Campbell were not being kind to her while they were fishing.


















Tuesday, 14 May 2013

Acrostic Poem by Room 9




MOTHERS DAY by Room 9

M otivated and mysterious
O rganized and obedient
T olerant and trendy
H onest and happy
E nergetic and eager
R esourceful and respected
S mart and savvy
D evoted and divine
A ffectionate and adorable
Y outhful and yearning

Mothers, You Mean The Whole World To US.