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Friday, 25 October 2013

Acrostic Poem, Karl

Taste Buds by Karl

Tucked 
Among
Sweet, sour, spicy
Teeth tasting
Eggs.


Breakfast
Uses chewing
Drives us to eat more
Survives between the teeth.

Thursday, 24 October 2013

Acrostic Poems, Chris


CARS

Car keys
Air bags
Reverse cameras
Seats











BUSES

Brakes
Underneath is the exhaust
Slow and fast
Enormous engine
Smokey and slow









By Chris

Wednesday, 23 October 2013

Acrostic Poem, Levi R

Taste Buds

WALT: Create acrostic poems

The taste on your tongue when you eat something yum
Always helping you with the joy of the day just keep on eating no matter what they say
Sweet heat makes you blush all day long no matter what!  
Tasting everything in your sight don’t eat too much or you might have doubts  
Eating healthy every day of the year don’t eat your sprouts or you might have your doubts


Biting your food will help you taste come on and bite again
Uses a lot of saliva to taste
Drives you crazy when you eat something sour
Sour power makes you crazy eat something sweet when you've gone too crazy

Story Review, Jahsiah

Story Review by Jahsiah

Memories by Anna Kenna


This story is about Sophie’s Memories about her Mum and her pony. She remembered the day that her Mum was on her feet and some of the things she did for the family.


This story takes place in Sophie’s Room and outside her house.
The characters in the story are Mum, Dad, the Pony, and Sophie.
The problem in this story was that Sophie was agitated because
her mum told her to do something and she didn't want to do it.
I liked this story because it was an interesting but sad  because Sophie didn't get time to do things with her mum as she used to when her mum was not in a wheel chair.


Friday, 18 October 2013

Taste Buds Poem

WALT: write poems.


Taste Buds


Tasting your food brings out your saliva
And so does drinking hot tea, coffee or the juice of a guava
Sometimes you’ll brush your teeth so that those taste buds feel fresh
Tell your friends and everybody that your tongue is not in a mess
Everybody got thousands of cells so you'd better get brushing before it becomes trash


Brush your teeth every day and night
Use a good brush and scrape your tongue bright
Doubt that you will have any bad breath
So be happy because your taste buds are in good health

By Melenaite

Taste Buds

Twisting on your tongue every day are your taste buds.
Throughout the day, your taste buds judge what each food tastes like.
Sweet, clean, healthy and fresh, is your taste buds always slick,
Taste buds are small and thick.
Eating food after lunch makes you want to eat a brunch

Brushing your teeth makes it nice and clean.
Under your teeth are your taste buds waiting to taste
Drinking makes your taste buds jump up and down
Scrunchie food makes your taste buds go KAPOW.

By Moses

Friday, 27 September 2013

Story Review, Fineasi


Story Review



Docking Day by Amanda Jackson


The story is about a family going to their farm to dock the sheep. The dogs had already begun working. In the distance, the sheep surged over the crests of hills like a tide of white maggots.
The characters in this story are Mollie, Mikey, Tama and the chocolate truck driver.
This story takes place at Uncle Tama’s farm.

I like this story because it was funny. The chocolate truck rolls down the hill and the children helped the truck drive collect all the boxes that fell out of the truck.