Story Review by Levi F

Story Review by Levi F

The Day Mary Shook the Karaka Tree by Jan Farr

This story is about some parents playing tennis every Thursday after work. The children went to the tennis court with their parents and they collected the tennis balls when it went out of the tennis court.  

Mary  climbed up the Karaka tree and shook it and all the tennis balls that were stuck up in the tree fell down to the ground and the children picked them all up.

The characters in this story are Mary,Wynne,Pete,Dana,Mum and dad.

This story takes place at the tennis courts and at the karaka tree.

I liked this story because the karaka tree had lots of tennis balls stuck in it and the children were able to shake the balls off the tree.

Story Review by Levi F

Story Review

Big Shift by Jacqui Brown

This story is about a mum and dad who split up and the mum and the children move out of their farm in the country  and they go and stay in  Wellington with their mum.

The characters in this story are dad,mum, the three children, Tomo and Meilai. This story takes place in the country and in the flat they were living at in Wellington.

I liked this story because it tells us how people live in the countryside and what life is like in a city.

Levi, the Learner

Greetings and Kia ora, my name is Levi F and I am 9 years old.

My best friend are Levi R, Fraser, Jahsiah, Jayden and Moses. I like doing Maths at school.  

My favourite take away is Burger King and my favourite drink is coke.

When its lunch time, its cool as because I get time off  school work for a while to play with my friends.

I also like going on car rides with my mum and brother.
Here is my blog

Room 9's Bio Poems

Bio Poem

Sam

Sporty,artistic and friendly

Lover of having a shower and singing,kung fu and watching tv

Who feels happy when he get gifts and cakes on his birthday

Who wonders if  he will have a happy life

Who fears big black biting  spiders

Who likes playing his uncle’s guitar

Who is able to run, write, read and play games

Who dreams of a  happy life.

By Sam



Bio Poem

Nga

Sporty,gamey and musical

Lover of playing games, shopping and going on bus rides

Who feels good when he goes on the bus and the plane because he can look down

Who wonders why god loves us so much

Who fears the passing away of his Nana

Who would like to be the best  army officer

Who is able to play play games and sports well

Who dreams of being in the army.


By Ngatokorua


Bio Poem

Moses

Sporty, cool and kind

Lover of playing sports, drawing pictures and eating Mc Donalds

Who feels excited when he is going somewhere fun

Who wonders  what is inside the walls, a chicken and what is lava made from

Who fears a big tsunami

Who would like to be a famous rugby star when he grows up

Who is able- to play sports well

Who dreams to be a police officer.

By Moses



Bio Poem

Mata

Sporty, Musical and Creative

Loves singing with her  older sister and eating chinese lollies

Who feel  warm when the sun is shining on her

Who wonders how the rainbow shines up in the sky


Who is scared when she is at home by herself in the night


Who would like to travel  all around the world


Who is able to run around the field five times


Who dreams to be a singer.

By Matangaro



Bio Poem

Levi

Who is sporty, playful and friendly

Likes to play video games and  with friends

Lover of swimming, running and eating chocolate

Who feels happy when riding on skateboards

Who wonders about how a rainbow appears

Who fears death

Who would like to be a superhero

Who is able to do work using the netbook.

By Levi


Bio Poem

Karl

Sporty, intelligent, gamey

Lover of Star Wars Movies ,Lego Star Wars Games and Mum and Dad

Who feels happy when he swims

Who wonders about heaven

Who fears spiders, monsters, satan, the devil and hell

Who would like a Limo

Who is able to run

Who dreams of cars.

By Karl


Bio Poem

Jayden

Nice, playful, good boy

Lover of playing games, climbing trees and going to the movies

Who feels awesome when having hot chocolates

Who wonders what job he will have when he grows up

Who fears death

Who would like to have a shield to protect

Who is able to climb up trees.

By Jayden



Bio poem

Fineasi

Sporty, funny and brainy

Lover of chocolate muffins,video games and Kung Fu

Who feels sad when it is raining

Who wonders how life will be

Who fears for his Grandad’s life

Who would like to be a Fisherman.

By Fineasi