Story Review

WALT: I am learning to write a review of what I have read.

Our Glittering Baby by Janice Marriott.

This story is about Sharon’s new born baby sister named Maisie.

When Brendan's mum had a baby,  Dad rushed back home to tell the family about it. Then Dad went back to the hospital. He said the baby looked  just like them.  Then the children made a card for their new baby sister.

The Characters in the story are Nana, Brendan, Sharon, Mum, Dad and the hospital people.

This Story Takes place In the hospital and at home.

I like this story because it is exciting and it reminds me about babies.

Story Review by Dasharn

The Experiment by Diana Noonan 

This story is about an experiment where Alisha’s teacher puts a chocolate chip biscuit in the pie warmer at school during the pie warmer day. The characters in this story are Alisha, Dad, Mum and the children from school. This story takes place at Alisha’s school that is in the countryside and the children live on a farm. I liked this story because it tells us about how children live on a farm.